Unit 21 M2 responding to feedback

Presentation Pitch

I first created a draft of my pitch which I  presented to my class to allow me to gather feedback on how my presentation can be improved and make my pitch look more professional and easier to read.

for example with my presentation it was hard to read from some distances due to the font size being at 13. The font was then changed from 13 to 18 to be larger to allow it to been seen from all distances from the board.

I was then that i was putting to much text onto my slides which would draw the viewers attention away from me presenting. Therefore to improve my slides i moved to majority of text to make that what i say down to the bottom and summarise the text which is actually on screen.

 

Proposal

And like my presentation i also created I first created a draft of my proposal which I  presented to my class to allow me to gather feedback on how my proposal can be improved and make my pitch look more professional and easier to read.

Proposal v1 & v2 added header

 

 

Proposal v1 & v2 added footer

 

 

Proposal v1 & v2 moved table to seperate page